최신 GED-Writing 무료덤프 - GED Language Arts - Writing (Essay Writing Exam)

A. replace the move with having moved

B. change call to calling

C. remove the comma after Finally

D. insert a comma after move

E. replace too with two

A. remove sentence 21

B. move sentence 21 to follow sentence 2

C. move sentence 21 to the beginning of paragraph C

D. no revision is necessary

E. move sentence 21 to the beginning of paragraph A

A. a little

B. lives by

C. them into

D. each day

E. brief day

F. When I was a child.B.A clergyman said that he read the comic strips in the daily paper every day.C.This amazed me because I believed that comics was for the young.D.I thought adults considered comics juvenile.E."But no,"he said."Comic strips can give you an insight into the human condition the way people think and behave." (6) Today, most would agree that he will be right.(7) The wide range of topics treated in the daily comic strips doesn't miss much about how people live their lives.
(B)
(8)
A popular comic strip subject is family life.(9) Strips on the family range from stay-athome parenting with all its joys and trials to when the kids went to a restaurant with all the things that can go wrong there.(10) Some strips deal with sibling relationships.(11) Others explore adolescence and the stresses of children becoming more independent.(12) The humorous look at the role of husbands and wives in the family also makes for interesting reading.
(C)
(13)
Pets have been playing an important role in comic strips.(14) Sometimes they are secondary to the human characters, the family dog, or rabbit, but sometimes it is the whole
point of the strip.(15) Who can resist a cynical self-centered cat or a lolloping, brainless dog, especially if it gets the better of the humans?
(D)
(16)
Comic strips allow people to laugh at themselves and their very human failings.(17) A little light is brought into our lives by them for a brief moment each day.(18) They are also abarometer of popular culture, telling what the social trends are and how some people regard them.(19) If the comic strips suddenly disappeared from the newspapers, society would lose a valuable piece of its culture. -- Exhibit -Sentence 17:A little light is brought into our lives by them for a brief moment each day. If you rewrote sentence 17 beginning withThey bringthe next words should be:

A. change Keep to To keep

B. replace they with it

C. change is needed to needed

D. change is to are

E. change Keep to Keeping

A. you don't like, the idea of lugging

B. lugging fishing gear or binoculars, you can go

C. a nature walk instead of fishing

D. lugging, fishing gear, or binoculars

E. binoculars on a nature walk

A. by my having returned the invoice that was unpaid.

B. when I return the unpaid invoice.

C. when I return unpaid the invoice back.

D. when unpaid I return the invoice.

E. when returning unpaid the invoice back.

A. Many of us today take for granted certain features of a house and forget that someone had to invent them.D.The veranda, a covered porch that wraps around the front of many southern houses is probably an adaptation of overhanging roofs found all over the world.E.In addition to the veranda, the South is known for its cooking and its hospitality.(6) Long ago, home builders responded to hot, humid climates by making the cooling shade of a porch a common feature of houses in such places as West Africa, Asia, and the Mediterranean area.
(C)
(7)
For instance, French settlers in New Orleans tried to put the frames of their homes directly on the ground as they had done in France; however, the heat, humidity, and abundant rainfall caused the homes to rot within a few years.(8) The settlers learned a lesson by observing the West Indian Creoles, which built raised houses with many doors and windows to keep cool.
(D)
(9)
Some settlers, like those from Germany, held on to their old building methods even though such methods were no longer necessary.(10) Because of a shortage of wood in some parts of Germany, builders had constructed half-timber houses; they used clay or brick to save wood.(11) When German immigrants settled in Wisconsin where wood was abundant, they still built their familiar half-timber homes.(12) European peasants and their
animals once shared a shelter called a "house-barn," which allowed immediate care for the animals during harsh whether.(13) Today's covered breezeways serve a related purpose of protecting people who need to go to their"car barns,"or garages.
(E)
(14)
No matter which country settlers started from, they brought home-building traditions.(15) Some they changed to adapt to their new land, some they abandoned,and some their descendants still use today. -- Exhibit -Sentence Here is a question that is not as silly as it sound:Have you ever wondered why houses are shaped the way they are? Which correction should be made to sentence 1?

B. insert a comma after wondered

C. Here is a question that is not as silly as it sound:Have you ever wondered why houses are shaped the way they are? B.Bringing with them many different ideas about how to build a house, settlers from around the world have come to the United States for centuries.
(B)

D. change they are to they is

E. insert a comma after question

F. change sound to sounds

G. change Have to Has

A. change stretch to stretching

B. replace one with won

C. change them to it

D. replace your with you're

E. change Flatten to Having flattened

F. Generally, you start with the bread dough, putting on some toppings, and bake the pizza in the oven.(6) However, you must first preheat the oven to 500 degrees for at least a half
an hour.(7) After preheating the oven divide the dough into four equal balls.(8) There are, however, a few specific steps to follow for successfully making a pizza at home (9) Flatten one of the balls and stretch them with your hands into a circle.(10) Next, place the dough on a metal or wooden baking sheet that has been dusted with flour, then coat the dough with tomato sauce and other toppings, including a drizzle of olive oil.(11) Finally, for the best effect, slide the dough from thebaking sheet onto the pizza stone.(12) Baking for about 15 minutes until the bottom is cooked and the edges are brown.
(D)
(13)
There is other important things to remember as you make your own pizza.(14) Make sure that your dough is soft so that it is easy to work with.(15) Also, to avoid creating a soggy pizza, you should use tomato sauce sparingly.(16) Now you are ready to enjoy a pizza at home that is the equal to that of your favorite pizza parlor.(17) Bon appetit! -- Exhibit -Sentence 9:Flatten one of the balls and stretch them with your hands into a circle. Which correction should be made to sentence 9?

G. Since the conventional oven at home cannot produce such intense heat, you must use a conventional oven equipped with a pizza stone.D.An oven of this kind preheated for half an hour will make you a very good pizza.
(C)

H. Its almost impossible to bake a Sicilian pizza at home like those pizzas baked in your hometown pizza parlor.B.The reason is that wood-fired brickovens at the pizza parlor generates the intense heat needed to create fine pizza.
(B)

A. needs to be painted

B. need painted

C. need to be painted

D. needs painting

E. would needs to be painted

A. Learn to be creative with words and making

B. Learning to be creative with words, you can learn

C. Being creative with words and putting

D. Learn how to be creative with words and to make

E. Being creative with words, and make